Slain

by David   Sep 10, 2006


I see myself with you
But that makes me blind
I do some soul searching
There’s nothing to find

I see myself with you
But that makes me burn
My heart turns to ash
What must I learn?

I see myself with you
But that breaks my heart
And it hurts so badly
Knowing we’re apart

I see myself with you
And all I feel is pain
I cry blood
My heart has been slain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. I loved the repetition! The rhyming was great and the poem flowed very nicely as well. Keep it up!

    && thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*TDG*~

    Yah i liked this poem. its real good. keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey if you like this poem then plz feel free to read, rate and comment on my others! :)

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