Wow, another great job by you and another 5/5 by me.

This one is well written aswell Love.
Keep up the good work.

A very well written poem.. well done 5/5 xx

Hmmm interesting. I loved the whole repetition. I liked the whole idea..but I think you can expand more on your words. I just seemed unfinished...but none the less still great!!! Just a minor suggestion...you definatly don't have to listen to me at all! It was a great poem! 5/5
~Dana

Another beautiful penned you potray here, illusion yet beautiful emotions...

Interesting

Wow.....thts all i can say....it makes me scared sorta...