The topic was very original and eery. It also had some sadness in it too. Keep it up

I've missed reading your work so much! This is another example of how great of a poet you are. Very unique type of poem; I enjoyed it. You definately packed a lot of intensity into only seven lines---- Keep it up, hun!! 5/5

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Another great poem by a great poet. I really do enjoy reading your poems as you know how to write your true feelings. another 5/5 from me.

For a short poem, its very expressive...it had a nice vibe to it, it was one of those poems you just enjoy reading over and over...i probably read it about 5 times..lol...anyways 5/5...good work:):)

Lol, the sandman! =P Tehee, sorry, back to the poem.. It was great, it flowed well, and I love the Pleiades format.. The descriptions were very detailed and full of imagery and the poem had an eery feel to it! Nicely done! 5/5

Interesting. Very interesting. You are a unique writter Shin, I love that about you! Nice work.