Sorry about ur loss, niicely written.5/5

Astig itong tula mu.. anyone can really relate to this poem.. dahil halos lahat tayo namatayan na.. wow! i seriously think you are an amazing poet.. 5/5 idol kita!!

Very deep and well written! The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was deep. Although, it did seem a little repetitive... 5/5

Just remember he will always be proud of you and he will always be in your heart!

Oh, this poem is so sweetly sad. It really made me think of losing one of my own brothers. I really like it, even though it saddened me. Good job!