That poem was lovely, well done it had a great flow!

Its beautiful, as i've said before. put the others on here aswell!

xxx

It's so cool that you painted such an image with so few words. It's very dark and dramatic... I love it.

Interesting...

Very dark...I loved the way you said black tears it conveys a strong image. It definetely cought my attention. u should write more. Well c-ya

Like it mr spike

can relate

I think its quite powerful..

and prob deserves higher than 4.3.

however, a couple of flow issues on a few lines..

but it kept me reading.

i like the short lines. powerful and abrupt.

quite the way it should be. =]

great poem. =]