Comments : u broke my heart & riped in2 u no wat i want to do 2 u

  • 17 years ago

    by meryeva

    I feal the exact same way

  • 17 years ago

    by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9

    I Love this poem one of the best works that I've ever read. Really Good Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris W.

    I am glad you can get your aggressions out by writing. this is a good poem, but i wish you didnt have to feel like that. Dont let guys get you so upset. We are all just stupid and ignorant about womens feelings..lol. I know because my fiance reminds me all the time! You will be fine i promise. growing up in this world can suck....a lot.

  • 17 years ago

    by Scream_my_name

    Guys are always such jerks. i hate that they leave you for someone and not even care later. remember that guys just suck. lol. hope you feel better

  • 17 years ago

    by leanne

    This is a good poem i like the way u express the way you feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Good stuff. it sucks that 'IN LIFE PAIN IS UNAVOILABLE

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Ya, I know guys can be jerks sometimes, they usually don't know what they are doing, its just a natural part of being a guy. He shouldn't have left you for another girl, but that was probably the worst decission he will ever make. oh wells, as long as he broke up with you, he has to live with the guilt and the feelling that he will never hold you, or kiss you, or carress your soft hands ever again. and I don't think that is a feeling that he likes at all, so in the end, you got your payback... Good poem, so much emotion, it is almost hard to read, I know, I wen't through the same thing... I you ever wan't to someone to relate to, im here for you. I hope this work out with you and if you don't like him, I hope he rots in hell for what he did to you.

    Peace out, Bert