This poem is so sad, I love it. And I guess it's about you. I can totally relate to the third stanza, especially with self hate. I don't have an eating disorder but I have low self-esteem. =( I know what you mean...somehow.

I hope you're doing better by now.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Wow, this poem just blew me away! it was mint!

Very very deep poem. great work

Aaww sweetheart!!! what an amazing poem! so sad! but yet beuatiful!!
babe i miss u!
u havnt emailed me back
:(
xoxo
10/10

OMG. that is so sad....but so good...I like the way it flows..great job keep it up! -xxx-

Exactly who is the gal ur saying? pretty twisted my mind, ermm, well overall it's pretty gud...get wot ur saying, juz dun get who u r saying lo...

Aww hunni this is soo sad, theres so much da*mn emotion in this, u know if u need to talk im always here for ya!
much love
hayley

Oh god, this is so sad, but written so greatly, i hope this is not a true story...
you have such a great talent with words that is why I enjoy your every line in every poem.
this was another amazing work of you that deserve nothing less than a 5/5

Very touching job. Great flow and wonderful emotions

Wow...awsome..i can relate sorta which sorta makes it more awsome...soo a 5/5 for me

Very emotion..well written
take care 5/5
luv FallenxFromxGrace

Wow, I think I am going to cry. This is so sad. The girl sounds a lot like me... but I haven't died yet. Great write!