Comments : The Girl With The Fake Smile

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is so sad, I love it. And I guess it's about you. I can totally relate to the third stanza, especially with self hate. I don't have an eating disorder but I have low self-esteem. =( I know what you mean...somehow.

    I hope you're doing better by now.

    Good job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow, this poem just blew me away! it was mint!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brisa

    Very very deep poem. great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    Aaww sweetheart!!! what an amazing poem! so sad! but yet beuatiful!!
    babe i miss u!
    u havnt emailed me back
    :(
    xoxo
    10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephy

    OMG. that is so sad....but so good...I like the way it flows..great job keep it up! -xxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Exactly who is the gal ur saying? pretty twisted my mind, ermm, well overall it's pretty gud...get wot ur saying, juz dun get who u r saying lo...

  • 17 years ago

    by Hayley

    Aww hunni this is soo sad, theres so much da*mn emotion in this, u know if u need to talk im always here for ya!
    much love
    hayley

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god, this is so sad, but written so greatly, i hope this is not a true story...
    you have such a great talent with words that is why I enjoy your every line in every poem.
    this was another amazing work of you that deserve nothing less than a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very touching job. Great flow and wonderful emotions

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow...awsome..i can relate sorta which sorta makes it more awsome...soo a 5/5 for me

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Very emotion..well written
    take care 5/5
    luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 16 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow, I think I am going to cry. This is so sad. The girl sounds a lot like me... but I haven't died yet. Great write!