Alright, I'm going to be honest, since this is for your great-grandmother.

I do not, by anyways, like the last stanza... It seems so...silly? I don't know if that's the word, but I know you have more talent then that. Harsh, I know, but honesty hurts.
Now, the rest of the poem was written wonderfully. It was very strong and is immensly true. You will see her again; there's no reason to say goodbye. I hope all your family is doing well. Nicely written poem.
My advice: Change the last stanza. But that's only an opinion.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I love your poetry, and i have read poems of yours before, doesn't matter how many times i read you poem in your profile, i still lov it, bye.

Very Interesting write..
Keep up the good Work!

5/5
God Bless!

U should try to make this longer
or to make this a Series Poem
It would be Awesome
from wat u have its amazing
Graet job
and Congrats on the contest
5/5
~MF~

Short, but beautiful. Again... I can relate to this. Don't stop writing. You have a true tallent.

I liked this one.
I thought it could be a little longer, to add more depth, but apart from that I think you did a very good job.