Hi Lyla,
good poem, great concept, and it was very much from the heart. Just one question...whos Joey?
ttyl, Billy

Wow i love your poem its what everyone thinks when they think its love

Aww, very sweet poem. I love the rhyme scheme. I love the flow. It brought a smile to my face. Awesome job. Keep it up. 5/5

Oh my god!!! What a great poem, It flows, its descriptive, Its one for the poem scrapbook so it won't be lost.

Laurie