Oh, this is so sad, i hope everything is fine with you, 5/5

Holy crrap. I LOVEDD THIS POEM. I couldn't take my eyes off of it not even for one second it reminds me so much of me. omg i am completely and totally speechless. this was amazingggg 10/10

Woah. that was awesome, and i really liked it. plus i can kind of relate to it.

"These convulsions shake me with truth and demise,
Holding this bottle of deadly lies.
Stuck to torment, I grieve for more.
Silence rises when I hit the floor.
Trembling, Bleeding, words can not describe,
the feelings I have while I attempt to die. "

As soon as I read that stanza, I got speachless. This was amazingly written and so sad. I loved it.

This poem is very good, mostly everyone i know has no clue how things are, but with this poem it should explain how guys are with girls and how they can affect us.

Very Very Very good job on this one i loved it.!!!!

Another great poem 5/5

I lived different pills but I get the same meaning, like what you write it is filled with feeling

Wow I loved this poem it had so much intensity.
Samantha

Speechless!