WOW! lol i wish that i could write like this, that i had this level of vocabulary if nothing else.... its really good, it had some really good images in it:

"Banished to mind's Coventry, I heed the demon's call
Beckoned by the silent screams, I enter Dante's hall."

wow

:)

Omg toad ur awesome at old english i love this sure i dont understand some but i love it alot so descriptive.
~*~mouse~*~