Wonderful poem! It is so beautifully written and deep. A true masterpiece I feel. I've always loved your poetry. Keep it up!

Love it. Great message. Nice use of words.

I really like your word choices in this one, 5/5

I like this poem, as i like ryming poems very much!! n i really like the title!

You are a truly talented poet.. You manage to form wonderful sentences out of any words.. Nicely done! 5/5

Very beautiful

Arsalan D.

The talents there, and the concept is one easily related to. I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more of your poems.

You write in the same sort of vein as me Only better No IM NOT JEALOUS lol
terrific poem loved the flow
had to vote and give it 5 even though it puts your poem above mine in the top poems of this catagory
but im only on for the comments votes can be fixed and comments can help you rectify

peace
John

Wow really loved this! great rythem and it flowed very nicely 5/5 good job keep it up

This is a very good poem I wish I can write them like that

I love how the rhyming really flows with context of the poem. Also the lexis used is very nice flowing and calm.

This is beautiful.
really good wording
i love it
good job