Comments : Haiku

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    While Haiku's are hard for me to judge, I read your poem twice to see if it was just as it appeared to be on the surface of if there was another deeper meaning to the poem. I'm not a fan of the word Or to start off a sentence but you appeared to pull it off well even starting the last line with So. It had nice imagery to it with the sparkling diamonds and the truth on some levels of your first sentence.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Eh, not your best, I'll be honest, but in these few lines you said quite a lot. I liked the imagery and the explination for the rubies. Nicely done.

    xDarkSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is very nicely written, i really enjoyed reading it, 5/5 for you

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job, great descriptions!

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Whew...Perfect...
    Impressive haiku..

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Wonderful.. im not fond of haikus but this i actually liked this one.. haha keep up the good work! even if there were only 3 lines.. there was so much imagery.. great job!

    ~angel~

  • Hey, really short and i cant really find any hidden messsage, but i like, it not to complex so it doesnt make me think to hard. lol
    love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Enticing haiku. I love the form because it allows you to create wonderful images and concepts in so few words/lines. This was a beautiful write, and quite enjoyable. Oh and thanks for the comment on my "manager" poem, I'm glad you liked it sweetie.
    Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Just like you to say so much in such few words. I can never tell you how much I admire your work.

    Love
    shobhana