I think it looks just fine under miscellaneous...you used antonyms for the first words, put they kind of mixed up.....like it though..everyone needs hope in something, and I'm a pessimist!lol.

This is a nice poem! love how you used your words, and love the style of it! keep it up!

Great poem. you did a wonderful job on it. it's short but great. flowed nicely too. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

I don't know what type it is...but I do know that it is really well written and that you have a real talent for writing...
Keep it up..
Love
XxxXLysetteXxxX

Seeing as its ur bday i will comment 3 poems:) anyway, this was really good. i liked the use of wording. it just was really good. keep it up..the only pattern i can get is that some words rhyme...lol

I don't know anything of the diffrent poetry types and structure. This is a beautifully written poem. Great job!