My fears

by FallenAngel   Sep 14, 2006


Underneath my skin, i felt cold inside
inside my gut, i felt worlds collide
on the inside, i felt great rage
on the outside, i felt locked in a cage

I must get out, i must be free
I pray to god to hear my plea
I feel your pain, i suffer it too
This isn't the old pain i know, its something new

I now feel love, i did feel hate.
I wonder if this is all just fate.
It's coming to me now, i'm shedding my tears
I've finally realised my greatest fears

If i ever lose you, my soul would be dead
I'd drown in all the tears i would shed
Not all of what i say or do is right
But i try so hard to be with all might

As i write this, i wipe my tears away
But i pray and hope it's you that will stay
So now take some time, relax, shed your tears
Just don't bring about my greatest fears.

The fears of losing you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love the ending line you used...I thought that it added to the effect of the poem and it was very intense...
    Flow is good throughout and both word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable...once again, beautiful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Hey i really like the way that you write ur poetry. theres lots of agghh..mm..darkness, babe.
    ~sarah~

  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    This is a good poem also, but i will give you4/5 but i still LOVED IT never mind i changed my mind, i am gonna give ya 5/5 hehe, cuz it is a masterpiece...hehehehe

  • One amazing poem, i think its perfect and so sweet in a sense. Keep up the good work mate!

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