Comments : The End?

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    What happened to "Forever"
    That's what you said to me
    I guess it must of left
    Along with "Meant To Be"

    wow...this poem was so sad and so beautiful. I really liked the above and the last stanza..they are all great though. This was such a touching write...I have been sitting here and I just can't think of what to say. All I can say is that I do not see how a girl could leave a man that writes a poem like that for her. It was beautiful.
    Thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate it...it's cool that your from Ky too (^_^). You have a lot of talent, keep writing...I am going to add you to my favorites because I loved this.
    5.5 for sure
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessy

    Love this poem. . I can totally relate to this!!! keep the work up. . you made my favorites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shortii3

    Wow...thats all i can say is wow, u are really good, keep it up!
    ShOrTiE

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww! this poem is beautiful, I love it, your a great writer, keep it up, you rock!
    ____XOX

  • 14 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    What happened to "Forever"
    That's what you said to me
    I guess it must of left
    Along with "Meant To Be"

    loved that stanza and i loved the last one also.
    it showed desperation for wat u once had.
    thnks 4 the comment.
    lots of love,
    ~sore

  • 13 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    I absolutely love this poem. especially:
    What happened to "Forever"
    That's what you said to me
    I guess it must of left
    Along with "Meant To Be"