So sad but i can relate i really liked it 5/5 xoxoxoxo

Thats a really good poem and its also very sad its cool!
xXx
stacey

Aww such a sad poem, but so beautifully written.. the rhythmn was great.. excellent 5/5 xx

Amazing. loved it. 5/5
miss brittney.

Heart-felt job. My favorite part was
"Love was a fairytale, it never came true
Those happy moments, became fewer than few"

You may want to fix, "herself" and "couldn't"

Keep it up

Yeah great poems and nice using of words and a sad poems very well written i love the flow and the rhythm

Geneross 5/5

Good choice of words
with verygood lines on it.
Keep on writing on what you feel and like
5/5

God Bless!

Nice flow and some great words. Liked the imagery but in a way the end seemed to come unraveled...not sure how but it did and it didn't. Maybe it had been the words. I really liked this but it's not a favorite. Some excellent imagery and some choice words. Nice job.
~Faith-less

Very nice vocabulary and emotion. I loved the depth you sent to this poem. It was very well written, nice work.

Aww.. that is just an amazing poem.
Love was a fairytale, it never came true
Those happy moments, became fewer than few
Left alone her heart was to find
Happiness of a different kind
That was my absolute favorite stanza. It's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. The flow and rhythm of this was great and you had some great word usage! 5/5

This is another great poem! awsome write! loved the form and all!

Oh wow...another 5/5

Wicked poem... thanx for commenting on mine 5/5

Oh me gee! ^_^ This reminds me of me -gulps-. I got the impression that this girl was anarexic or bulemic, but you may have aimed for something else. I'm not 100% sure lol.

The rhymes were waay cliche. They didn't seem like they were very original to me. The flow wasn't all that good either. It seemed as if you were trying to rhyme rather than trying to write a poem. Poems don't always have to rhyme. It's the emotion and structure thought up that makes each one unique.

Speaking of emotion, that's what I really liked in this poem. There was a lot of raw emotion, and I can totally relate 100%. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. I love getting mail anyways. ^_^ Even hate mail for that matter lol. Well done. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

+.+ Self-hate is becoming so often. It really makes me feel sad. :'(. It's an awsum poem. Lol. 5/5. P.S That poem AbOrTiOn WaS hEr AnSwEr, wasn't about me. It was for all the girls who go through that experience. +.+

Wow. that was absolutly beautiful and touching. you are now officially my favorite author and i love your poems. my favorite part was "Love was a fairytale, it never came true
Those happy moments, became fewer than few
Left alone her heart was to find
Happiness of a different kind" i can really relate to it, which is sad, but beautiful write. 10/10!

That one reallly touched me. alot. im so sorry if u have had or r goin through feelings like that. i have b4, and that was a really good, just really good poem. haha made me tear up more than the last one. lol

Soo powerfull. Really. I can relate too. Its just amazing, and so so real. Nice write. keep it up. 5/5