Love it

Wow excellent poem great work and thanks for the comment :)

Very unique theme and the way u wrote it, great work done, i really like dit

all the best and take care

Beautiful poem, oh my....such a creative and unique write....well done! best wishes to you, take care.... bert ~

OH my gosh! I loved this poem... it is absolutely amazing.. you have such talent.. never give up on that!! 5/5 awesome work!

Wow-a touching poem...very well written, i got shivers just reading it!!! good job

october xx

This was a good read.Is it a true story?..
Good work!

keep on writing on what u feel and like

God Bless!

That poem was so dark, sad and deep. It was meaningful, and powerful and I thought it was well expressed and worded. well done

I feel the emotion very sad... very impressive!

This was a good poem, it was a bit hard to read becauise it was all pilled together, but it was strong all the same. It was very nicely described and you could almost feel what the person was going through...good write

The content of this peice is so powerful... you really expressed yourself well.

(sorry these comments too so long... internet is being a pain)