This reminds me a lot of what I'm going through now, I really liked your poem, you are a great writter.

5 ALL THE WAY =)

Very touching. Beautiful read. :)

5/5

Touching words my sweet friend...beautifully penned...

Great poem about moving on. I really loved it. Jpoet*

A very well written poem. very touching good job on this keep em coming xx

I`m glad that your over the worst of it. people can be so cold at times when its not their own heart thats hurting.A wonderful poem.

What a long sweet good poem
your writing is similar to mine in as much as it rhymes and flows except i dont write about love(much too old for that)if i wrote about past loves it would have to be a book lol

never the less it is a truly great poem you should be proud

5/5
John

...I don't know if I do remember you...and I'm so sorry!!! Oye. I tried!! Beautiful poem though...and I do remember Hailie and Steph...supposedly, from what I hear, they're doing fine now. Much better, which is always good to hear...
God...
I've been on this site for too long, lol.

Dear i swear i don't like reading long poems but you caught my whole attention and i can't help not to finish the whole poem..meaning dear it was so GREAT, AWESOME AND ATTRACTIVE ON MY OWN SENSE!!! Keep it up

A great poem, the words are from the heart, showed love and true emotion. you are an awesome writer.
love Tara
Please check out some of my recent poems, thanks

I really liked this, it was very touching and moving.

A beautiful and sad poem...! I really liked the emotion you put on it and the way you turned out the things in the end.These last lines were awesome and actually i can totally relate and understand what you mean with those words.Excellent work, keep it up!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

It's practically perfect in every way. I coudn't have said anything like that better than you just did...I've rescently had the same problem with my ex...so I feel your pain. excelent work though. I hope to see more.
-amanda

Aww such a sweet heartfelt poem.. It was beautifully written and the rhythmn was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

Very touching,
wonderful wonderful write!

God Bless!

I really enjoyed reading this I can relate to it...its a good way to look at things instead of being depressed and negative about it I loved it nice flow 5/5

This poem gives hope to the broken hearted.
I love the way you write and how vivid each of your poems are.
..xx

That is a painful place to be, but i love how you ended it with thankyou.
Thanks for my comments!
..xx

Really beautiful sorry you got hurt i know how it feels hang in there keep writing your awsome

Awww...wow..reminds me so much of my very first love..it was beautiful, but could not last as wanted, but i dont regret it, and i still thank him in my heart for that wonderful year of sweet words and memories...this was such a brilliant write that had reat flow...another one of my favorites of yours.

xxxxpeacexxxx
Weeping.