Comments : Living as the rose

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Gave it a five because it had some really great thoughts and word use. but i must admit, i think the ending isn't as conclusive as I'd like. I wish there's was one more stanza to end it. Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Deep poem, with great word choice. And, also I like it. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this, i could have raised so many interpretation from within the words..
    You should be proud of yourself with this one, the language you use is as fragile and as delicate as the very flower you're writing about..
    Wonderful piece
    5/5
    *gem*