WoW!!!
I love this poem, It's really sad but I can fully relate to it.. keep writing and I'll Keep Reading

Bianka
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I really, really liked this. It was very touching and really made you think about the emotions behind the writing. I hope you don't really feel this way. Overall, a very good poem. Well done. 5/5

This is such a sad poem of despair.I can relate to the feeling, though, as I'm sure many can.This has a good flow and excellent rhyme scheme(I hope to see more of your work).But it is the emotion and meaning that really make this stand out.Just remember:we are always free to change(though it can be hard).Check out my poem ALWAYS POSSIBLE and you'll see what I mean.Never, NEVER give up on your hopes and dreams.Don't give up and let things get you down.Rise above your mood.It is all up to you.Hang in there.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka