OH. MY. GOD. I can't sleep...up...have to get up in 3 1/2 hrs..and I see this...oh my God. This has got to be about one of the coolest poems I have ever seen in my life..that's all I can say right now..will have to think on it read it about a dozen more times and comment again..if I did now, I would quote the whole bloody thing!!! Wow. Luv Michelle

well ok...let's see..firstly my favorite lines were roll the fag and drain the sea..umm..you know why.hah..second you hit the git last night, most likely! and I have to get up soon(can it still be get up if you haven't been down??) to print the tee ;)...oh and yes..go go ga goob..or whatever(ku ku cha choo sounds ok tho doesn't it??) Anyway.......I loved it, it's fantastic..not really more I can say about it because it was brilliant..would have to read you back the entire thing..and I guess you already know it! Take care..Luv..Michelle

hi Craig! this one really got me all tangled up inside! i do not know whether to laugh or to cry!?!? did not get it the first time round, but gradually it daunt on me the range of emotions it expresses... the silent insecurities - "muffled cry", "strangled sigh", "hush all sound", "drifting cloud", "pleas to the dark"... yet the crying out for attention! - "1...2...3..."!!! your poems, it just gets more complex doesn't it??? FIVE my friend!!!

WOW
long time sorry i havent comment on your new stuff been so busy i'll be here all night reading and commenting
ok ok i'll get on with it lol
this poem is filled with passion
whilst reading this i started to get a feeling in the pit of my stomach i carnt explain it's also awoken feelings i had tried to bury.
this is a fantastic pieace which never serprises me
i don't know where ever to love it or hate it
but it's certainly a amazeing piece
5 out of 5 yet again
all my love
lorns
xxx

you're brilliant babyxxx

STILL love this poem honey!!! :)xxx