Talent a plenty, I'll quickly go back and read your others, Elise

Interesting story indeed,Such mysteries engraved on the poem..
Good WOrk!

God Bless!

Beautuful!
i like it like ur other one! i hope u right more like this!

Okay.

Part one -
Amazng, great flow, wonderful structure, and wording. I loved it and every single part of that poem. It was a delight to read, and it was amazingly written.

Part 2 -
WOWWOWWOW!!!
That's like all I can think of?
I have nothing no words.
No thoughts nothing in my head, that will be genrated for my fingers to type.
Accept "WOWWOWWOW!!" That's all I can think of for this amazing poem. Parts one and two so perfect. Loved them.

I can't comment on this. I am completely speechless.This was amazing. I absolutely loved it. all I can say is wow.

Lol this one leaves me speachless!!!! good poem!

Nicely done again. You had some good imagery in this piece. & I liked that alot. Keep up the good work!!

Natalie``

What a strong poem.
I am full of questions.
Very well written.
..xx

This is amazing...i'm speechless. this is amazing, like i said already.
good job

Great poemyou got there.keepupthe excellentworklove it,*shay*