Damn! very well organized...very well written...reminded me of my ex & our good ol' days LoL Your poem feels real! Great job...anyone who has experienced such passionate love with another will definately connect and love this poem...

I love it..u bring out ur emotions very well..u bring everything to lifef in ur writing..keep up the good work

5/5

Em

Love it love it love it

That makes me all excited about sex.
i never experienced it. but, i would like to...

I love this poem!
i appreciate a real 'erotic' poem where smut is not needed.
this poem is beautiful.
..xx

I love it. It sounds like perfection. Your phantasm is 6 stars.