Comments : I pray this will last.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting story,
    You know how to put your emotions unto writing..
    Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmaly

    Beautiful poem....i love the words.....hope you have more coming

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice. I love how there is a story behind it, and "real life" sort of feeling. Something that could happen and/or has happened to everyone.

    -Luna

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice job...rhyme scheme was a little off, but overall i really enjoyed this poem. your a fav. of mine! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written darl very well d0ne. keep it up xx

  • 17 years ago

    by jessel jane

    Im totally speechless! What a nice poem to read... soothing...comforting... touching in a way one can never forget it's existence.Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    I liked it nice flow...alot of emotion put into it great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow...amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very passinate love poem that anyone in love can relate to

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Beautiful poem, very romantic, sounds like it wasworth waiting for!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    I LOVE this poem.
    everyone has felt this way and you put into words so perfectly.
    Thank you!
    ..xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Beautiful...just beautiful...keep it up. I could see it clearly happening in my head and it was so calming. I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by mysterious_x

    This really captures the moment, in the most easiest way. It's great! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This poem was really really beautiful, it shows the love you share with someone, it shows the confusing of feelings, and it was absolutely awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Elise Cregg

    Awesome poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Cadee

    Oh my god i love your poem its amazing..its just soo touching in everyway its unbelievable

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Very beautiful poem:)...keep up the good work your doing great!!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Amazing. I felt the very same way when i first fell in love. it is a beautiful thing. We all pray these things last...and hopefully they all will.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lynzie

    So sweet and really petty too 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessy

    Wow. . .that is a nice poem. . .I love it. . .Keep up the work. . .I LOVE THIS