Say it with me: fantastico!! Melissa, you've captured the feeling of the wind perfectly. It's so refreshing and very much a wonderful pleasure to read.

This is truly wonderful!! You've placed the wind and the change of season with ease, a pleasurable read!

Lol, it was quite windy today indeed. I thought I was going to get blown away, and to be honest, I did!.. This poem really blew me away :P
Very clear description of the windy, which I thought was great to describe something we really can't see. Excellent job on this one Mel.

Beautifully written with such vibrance. I love it. Keep it up~Holly

Beautiful free-style non-rhyme poem. Nice usage of words

Wow i loved this poem. Think its very different and amazing. 5/5

Ahh those last two lines are amazing.

Incredible. Second stanza was perfect. 5/5

That's really beautiful

I like the imagery a lot. this is the first poem i have come to enjoy on this site

Bravo, and superb poetry writing with clarity, imagery and cohesiveness! You demonstrate
efficient usage of the english language. You get high marks from me. Keep sharing.
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FireFly747

It isnt my style, but its good in its own right. Keep it up!

I had to see for myself why this poem was one of the winners for the weekly contest. Now I know why. This poem is really excellent it has no flaws that I can see. It flowed beautiful and it pulled me deep into it. You have painted a picture that should be exposed in a gallary. You have done a wonderful job. Keep up the excellent work. I really don't understand why you don't have a 5.0 rating, but I guess some people don't see the true beauty of it. 5/5

Letty

Beautifully written.

You reminded me to appreciate the beauty this world has to offer. So many times the simplest things just pass us by unnoticed. Great job!

Wow, you've defenitly managed to embody that moment. Awesome imagry, especially that second stanza