Oh this is so sad, Darien.

"Phone calls come once a blue moon
I've forgotten the sound of songs"
^^^ I love these line, so sad but beautiful at the same time. Nice work!

It's good. I know where you are coming from it just happened to me.

Amazing! such deep in emotions. it's like a litter and a story. the ending got me thinking. u got a good flow. love is sad. gr8 job:)

I'm with Diana on this one. Your words are somehow enlightening, but so discreetly. I feel sadness and pain from your words, did your heart break? The message within your words is incredibly heart breaking.

Wow Darien, this is simply truly heart aching....I love it so...

Simply touching, heartwrenching and ringing with such clairty. The end is so perfect and can be taken in a couple ways all of which add to the beautiful intensity of the poem. Great write!!!

Awh! This was sad, Darien!! ..I really liked the ending though, it was great!!

I'm glad you've written something... cause I don't think I'm gonna write anything for abit.. I'm just sooo braindead.

This was awesome though! Keep it up muh SMAWCE brother. ;P 5/5

Natalie``

WOW great choice of words every lines contains a true emotions and says a meaning a poem that made other cry and really great feelings on here great job

Geneross

Dont see any mistakes

Awesome poem. you have alot of talent. keep it up.

.:Sam:.
.:Fem of the Blood:.

Phone calls come once a blue moon
I've forgotten the sound of songs
What does the outside hold for me?
And when will you ever come home?

^^
This stanza tells of such sad emotion and pain .
Hope all is well, sweet Darien .
Such a heartbreaking piece, my friend .
Do take care !

P.S Congrats for hitting the P&Q front page with this poem, it is well deserved .

Ahhhh...Hrm...I liked it.
At first I didn't know where it was going, or leading. I was slightly confused. As I kept reading though, it tied into what the title said. I enjoyed this poem Darien. I thought it was well written and it was easy to read, and follow what you where talking about. Lovely work.

Wow.. that was very good. I liked the emotion and heart you put to this one. A very nice job, indeed. Good work.

Nice job. Finally a new poem eh? lol. The content and the meaning was clear. But the descriptions and the flow wasn't as good as your other poems. Keep it up

I'm speechless. I really don't know how to comment on this poem..I loved
it. (I can at least say that much). You
have amazing talent. Your able to keep the reader enthralled and thats a
plus. I look forward to reading many
more of your poems. Keep up the
magnificent work..5/5

Love
Letty

PILLOW!!! Hey...How R U? I haven't talked 2 u in ages...I'm not even sure you still remember me! :) I accidentally found this poem, and like always, you've impressed me again...I love your poetry...It always has the perfect amount of suspense...I love this poem so much(like I do all your poems)!!! Anyways...hopefully we can talk again sometime soon! Luv Ya Lots...Your "Pillow"!

"I'll forgive, if you forget.
When I said "I love you"

Those two lines hit a spot
There was a lot of emotion in that poem which is what i like =)
So great work!
5/5
*Gem*

Not bad.. good poem keep it up!

Darien. grrr i wish i could write like you. i loved loved loved this poem. you expressed what you had to say perfectly. it was flawless. i love reading your poems. for some reason they alwaysss make me smile. definitely 5/5..oh oh anddd I ME AM COOLER THEN YOU =D

I lovelovelovelove, it!!

"I've got a few good words for you
With no intentions of selling them
Beg for forgiveness like you want it
Ask for second chances like you need it.

Wrong again but you can pretend
Like everyone is still listening
Don't believe me but I'm right
When I say this isn't easy"

Favourite part, of the whole poem it was amazing. I reallly enjoted it. I think I have left a previous comment, but now that I have read it twice. I love it even more, and so much more stands out. :]]]]]]]

Again, i liked it.