How do you?

by me   Sep 19, 2006


How do you tell someone you love them
because your condemed
with this feeling inside
no you cant hide it, it can't be denied
but how should i start
maybe i should start
with how i feel in my heart
i'll tell you before you tear it apart
but how do i tell you
cuz you need to know i love you
but let me see and think this through
don't you think that too
but you know what i should just tell you
that i love you

*let me kno wat u think comment and ill return favor*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    I found the rhyming in this poem to be rather trivial. Howver, overall the poem really wasn't that bad.

    The only thing I would suggest is to be consistent with your spelling. You switch between using 'u' and 'you'. I like to see you spelling it out fully, but I'm not going to judge based on that. The poem would just look nicer if you stuck with one of them.

    Just a thought. But nice job. :)

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