Such mysteries on those words that perfectly matched the scene and emotions of the poem.

Leaves falling to the ground like pixie dust,
Slashing her midnight heart with the blade of lust
Fires burning in her eyes, doused with empty promises
((These lines are my favorite..))

I loved this poem. It is absolutely amazing. While a little cliche with the rhyming on one part, I have no other complaints. This is simple wonderful. Nothing less to say. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wonderful, superlative, outstanding, superb write in all aspects; rhythm, thyme, flow, imagery, excellent!!!

Wowee-- Jenna!! This was awesome!! Very good imagery too. I loved this. Awesome job hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Jenna darling that was absolutely breathtaking!! WOW I loved it!!

"Leaves falling to the ground like pixie dust"

Wonderful line. Amazingly brilliant poem. Keep it up!

God Bless,
Jenna