How beautiful. She was blessed to have a friend such as you, who gives her tribute. I hope you still are involved in the childrens lives, so that they can know their mother through you even after passing. Great writing.

I can say this poem is very touching to me i could easily put myself in those childrens place. To have a loved one with cancer is one thing, to loose one from cancer is another and i have had both. And on some circumstances i still do. Great job on this!

Any one who votes below 5 hasn't got a heart......
heartbreaking write

Wow, I absolutly love this poem... I love the way it goes together too... awesome job...

What a beautiful poem i know your friend is smiling down from heaven. what a thoughtful thing to write.
god bless
5/5
also thank you for the great coment on my poem

That was beautiful...im still crying wow...its very touching..and im sorry for your loss..i hope everything gets better with time...

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I am so sorry for your loss, my heart goes out to her family and to you, an excellent write !

My thoughts and prayers go out to cathys family

A beautiful tribute to your friend, sensitive and moving and touching I to have lost 2 friends now to cancer 1 with twins of 4 yrs old the other just last spring. greiving is a painful journey for loved ones and painful to watch to, I can relate.

Wow this an extremely heart-felt poem. I dare say you have done her justice by remembering her in such a memorable manner. She will now transend time. Utterly beautiful.

The imagery you create allows the reader to create a complete picture in their mind, this person was dearly loved and will be forever missed.

Thanks for a great read.

If you can find time, please have a read over my poetry and let me know what you think.

Natalie.

Gorgeous poem, makes me want to cry for the family and friends. It's sad but heartening at the same time thinking of heaven. wish i could feel so strongly about stuff, I kind of block stuff out so it doesn't hurt me so bad. good read.