Wow.. this one showed a lot of depth to it. I loved the emotion and flow you have in your poetry.. you are a great writer. =)

The knight struggles one last time against the chains,
He's losing faith and hope, but gaining shame

-I love these lines.
Great unique topic in which the hero loses instead.

Not 2 bad 4/5

Princess'

[Should this be princess's ..I could be wrong..]

Again, this was really nicely done. I loved how you opened up the poem, it really reaches out to the reader and lures them in. Awesome job on that! Flow and rhyming were great once again. There's nothing I'd change. {Except maybe what I stated above..}
Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Not bad, I enjoyed it

Beautiful flow. the tragedy lies with the tormented hero. we all meet this dilema sooner or later.

That is really an amzing poem!

My comp is wierd and wont let me comment on poems in love or friendship catorgaries so i am using this poem (which is amazing) to let you know what i think of your other poems, The window, is beautifully written it is quite amazing, like a onlook into some-one who is deeply in love's mind! My confession is different but i still liked it, it was such a wonderful read i was startled at the diffence in contrast between poem!

P.s. In case i did not make it clear, I really like these poem!

That is a really cool poem well all your poems are!! But this one is like from the midevil times....kool!!!