It is perfect!!

Hey thanks for reading my poems well i guess ill talk to u later then well ur poems were good as well..

Well thanks again i dont know if u got my other messages but if u have a yahoo messenger give me ur address so i can add u n we can talk there k well bye for now

I know how u feel girl, i sometimes fell that way when i'm lonly
5/5..keep it up
:)

Very relatable. Nice write.