Beautiful penned myfriend, it's simply but well inspirations written, keep them coming, take care.

best wishes from west,... bert ~

"We'd remember that money
Only buys what catches dust"

Trully wonderful sentiment. The whole poem was well worded and the flow was good.

But time isn't a vacation
You can never visit it twice
So now how will you live
The rest of your life?

This was a great ending. Loved the inspiration of the piece.

Fascinating questions!

Wow..I have been sittin here for about 5 minutes trying to think of what to say about this. It was really beautiful. I loved it..it was well written, had a prefect flow, and it was so so true. Great job and thank ytou so much for all the comments, they mean so much.
5.5
Breanna