Aww what a sad poem :[ beautifully written though 5/5 xx

Aww. Well.. I know where you are comming from. If you ever need anything, you know where to find me =)

WOW! excellant job on this one! love it!

-Mel

Excellent poem, its really sad but at the same time, its also really good! 5/5

I got goose bumps from this. I love it when that happens, because then I know it's an amazing poem. Great job. =]

Very grand, I liked how sad it was.. but at the same time felt really bad, I like sad poems.. I just wrote a new one called sorrow, it's not as good as yours, but I like it... It would mean much to me if you read it, and told me what you think.
By the way, not that I think your grammars bad, mines probaby worse, but the name of your poem "To late to save me" I think you put the wrong "to" there... y'know? I think it's "Too" Sorry.

-Flaming-

That is such a sad poem. veary well written. Is it true 5/5

Aww this is soooo sad, but you did a great job writing it. keep it up =] 5/5

Wow.. that was so sad. I almost cried.. Especially that last stanza, that one was so sad. You did such an amazing job on this. I hope it isn't based on anything true.. But the poem is amazing and you just did a great job on this! 5/5

Well im sorry but my poems votes all went down around the same time you said you voted on mine.

Omg! this is so sad, never mind the mum wiping a tear away i am having to do the same. its reli gd, keep writing. so sad! 5/5

This poem made me cry! it was soo sad :(

Even though i can't relate,
i can put my self in that position ..
very sad ..

10/10 ..!!

Oh my god, this was brilliant! I have no critisims to anything! I loved it! 5/5

OH MY GOD thats really really goood.. your really talented.. take care byee xxx

Great poem u have just told the story of my life in that poem... job well done keep it up
5/5

Wow... nice... very sad... good job :) 5/5

Sounds like the story of my life...i love your idea on how to write it...it really touched my heart...i hope your ok though...GREAT POEM STAY STRONG
auna

That poet really touched my heart waow it made my year watery

Omg this is def one of mi favs...but veri sad...i hav seen this happen to ppl and not say nethin bout it...
5/5
awsome
luv YNH