Wow very beautiful you are such an amazing wrter love your poems. you are the best poet ever! 10/10. all the way chica

Aw man that was a good poem. so sad though. i did actually tear up some. very touching. keep it up.

Wow thats a every deep poem you did a great job 5\5

Omg that was great.....it had so much passion

i live it

-Abbey

Omg that was great.....it had so much passion

i live it

-Abbey

Sorry.....love it

Hello im wheezie7589. im doing a poetry class at school my topic i picked was suicidel,death,cutting. i was wondering if i could use urs?

This poem is so good, im almost in tears. i really felt the emotion come through. i loved the way u used: mummy, rather than mommy. because (to me) it shows that this child is still very young and innocent and is going through all this shit. loved it, no mistakes or errors. can u say: JEALous
-The Writer

That poem was really sad. It was beautifully written tho! GR8 JOB!

I liked it i can feel the same way it use 2 happen 2 me?

This is so sad.

but really good:]

5/5

Wooooow!! excellent poem! it is really sad.. but what's even more sad is that thise things are happening in our society today =(

but really good job on the poem!! keep it up!