Comments : 14 Years

  • 17 years ago

    by Grace

    All i can say is watery eyes...and if u can remember me than u'll know why. it touched a special place in my heart.

  • 14 years ago

    by AlexBlythe

    I don't know how to start... this is so.. intense. One of the best poems I have read in a long time.. sounds so..realistic.. love it.. great job my friend..

  • 13 years ago

    by Rania

    Oh my...this moved me frm my chair like a hurricane..a calm one tho.

    this is absolutely full of emotions. and some times we can never understand the choices those ppl around us make, or even the actions they take sounds for us unfair unreasonable injustice regarding how they mark us deep inside.

    but sometimes we learn to forgive and accept, because when ever you understand that you can never change ppl, but ppl change alone once they recognize ..u will learn to be satisfied and happy.. even then.

    I love this piece, a lot.
    keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is very touching. i can feel a little resentment, yet forgiveness in this piece. all you want is a little time with your father, that isn't much to ask for at all... yet sometimes fathers only think of themselves, which in my opinion makes them a low piece of shit. it's his loss, not yours... he will regret it one day.