Great job
Excellently Written
Some Nice Rhymes
Good words
true moral
Awesome job
5/5
~MF~

Amazing
beautiful
wow

This is awsome i ove it cant write much in tech class yuck and dont know when the comp will crash so thats all good job on the poems:D

keenan

This isnt really a comment but i live in south jordan but it is still a great poem i feel for you

Lissa,

Everything is there. You listed our word in no certain order, but you still listed it. ANd the sad thing is... It's all we know, and it's all we are ALLOWED to know. It's amazing that you are speaking out against what people rely on. Your making everyone see the light in the shadow of people's one sided objective. Brilliant take on our nurtured lives. We DO need to learn how to become our own people, and not the replicas of people past.

Love you too

Love Niquee

I agree