Another very, very sad poem. =[ If this is true, i'm sorry for your loss. If not, you portrayed your emotions so true and real. Almost brought a tear to my eye. Keep it up. 5/5

Well done, my friend. This poem was so sad, really deep and powerful.
It was well written, words were expressed clearly.
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I had a good friend that was killed in a car crash, so I know how you feel, if this story is true. I like your poem a lot, keep up the good work! :)

Thanks for the comments.

Eek. I realized that subconsciously I took this from another poem I recently got a hold of.
I'm changing it as soon as possible.
YIPES!
I wrote a revized edition of this poem and will be posting it shortly.
I'm so sorry.
I should be condemned to poets hell for that.

Eek. I realized that subconsciously I took this from another poem I recently got a hold of.
I'm changing it as soon as possible.
YIPES!
I wrote a revized edition of this poem and will be posting it shortly.
I'm so sorry.
I should be condemned to poets hell for that.

Eek. I realized that subconsciously I took this from another poem I recently got a hold of.
I'm changing it as soon as possible.
YIPES!
I wrote a revized edition of this poem and will be posting it shortly.
I'm so sorry.
I should be condemned to poets hell for that.

This was a sad poem, but I enjoyed it.. well keep up the good work! :)

I really like this poem.. ur a great poem writer lol :]]

Thank you very much. :]