Where's the rest?!

I hated the ending...it was good until that. lol

Love it. I have to admit I like it rough and this just hit the right spot. Amazing... and I like your other works too.

Oh~god.. fcuking amazing loved EVERY second

Wow

U tured me on :)

Well holy crap.. that is the best erotic poem ive read in a while.. keep up the amazing work

I loved it it was amazing! u can really write!

One question.....WHY did it have to end!? keep writing ur really good

Your such an amazing erotic writter. You just describ everything right. it always turns me on
love it.
Ainsley...<3
merry christmas

Wow, that was a great poem. My bf would love for that to happen haha ;) The wording was great and so was the flow. I gave this poem a 5/5. Keep up the great work.