Its so cute.....
i cant help but think of my ex now...
he begs grrr
horrible boy he is...

Aww... so cute hun.
im not sure she even deserves you... but its ur call

4/5

Good jobb needs more detail, but overall its good. keep i up.

lissa

Aww ke cute antonces si la quieres de verdad

Love the poem reminds me of a time i was in the same plight

Beautiful poem 5/5. u've written this beautifully. well done. keep writing. things will be ok.