Wo that is frecky. i would hate to have had a dream like that. this poem is very good. I liked it. Please don't change it. It is good the way it is.

I think whomever rated this piece probably didn't know what this poem is really about. I guess growing up a cutter, you recognize a poem about it when you read it. This is definitely one.

It is a struggle to recover from such an addiction, and I know slipping occurs from time to time but I'm proud that you have moved on from this part of your life.

As for the poem, it is a very vivid description of the emotions, nightmares, and the reality of waking up to what you did to yourself the previous evening. Something some people never experience, perhaps.

I honestly loved it.

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