Spectacular....i really can relate to it... u write well....keep it up
Andi

An excellent heartfelt poem.. Beautifully written as always.. the rhythm and flow was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

Tht is soo awsum...soo powerful nd ful of emotion..5/5 no arguent'z..thnx soo mch 4 ratn mi poem i really apreciated it!! cont onmi othr poem'z plez..
xoxo keep it up
^^Hanz^^

Onc again you've done it, Keep writing!

Girl i loved this poem. It is so easy to relate to and i baiscally live my things like this. I wish boys could be put through what we are put through but they wont be. They only thing we can do is stick with eachother and hope they get hurt someday hahaha anyway great poem will you please go read my new one i just added and comment on it i would appreciate it thank you =)=)

WOW.
This is Great.
You are such a great writer, and i can so relate to your poems.
A total 5/5.
Good Job.

And I would love if you checked out my poems.

but anyways,
CONGRATS,
Yuli

Oh you poor thing. It sounds to me like you're in an abusive relationship, but that's really none of my business.

I liked this one. The flow was great, and the idea was really unique. The words were well written, and I loved it. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem is great..I can relate soo much..your a wonderful poet!

Thanks for commenting my poem!

Really good keep up the good work
~bre~

Wow this poem really hits home! i could totally relate to this. by far one of my favorite top 5 that i've read!! =]] excellent!!!

This is a good poem. it shows lots of feelings

So far i have read 3 of your poems and they were all wonerful but i would like to see a happy poem from you!

Love it 5/5

Wow, this is a really awsome poem! you did a really good job on this poem keep up the excellent work!!!!
.:RAYNE:.

Hey. good poem i can tell it comes from ur heart. if thats true im sorry. not all guys are like that.

This poem is really amazing.

Well done this is a great write! it contaianed so much emotion. well done! excellent!

sophie:)

ps. wuld love to see what u think of my poem 'Torn'. :)

I liked this, it was really well written and the flow was good.

Typo in the third stanza-- should be 'off' instead of 'of'.

Other than that, though, there's not really anything else wrong with this poem.

It's a creative write, and reads like a story... nice job! 5/5

Again, a very sad poem about love. You're a great writer and you sound like a great person and you don't deserve to be treated like this if this poem is true. 5/5 Keep up the great work!

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