This is a bold self expression with a touch of humility.. yeah this might not be a poem.
but i have to get it all out.
i need to shout

The poem reads like a rap but I am not narrow minded when it comes to poetry do you feel me?

I feel the emotion expressed in this poem so I believe you hit your mark

In others words I believe the poem delivered the affect the author desired

Very emotional peom but great wording choices, i enjoyed it, great job. 5/5 from me.

This really isnt your best poem, the rhyming was really shaky and the flow didnt really uh... flow?!

Sorry to be harsh.

also watch the puntuaction and capital letter.

3/5

~Murder.