Again, another favourite and another 5/5

Very clean and organized poem. It was easy to understand. Though it was a bit long for my taste.

Not bad. It was very sweet, and soppy and as love poems go it was readable. Ending how you started worked well, it reminds the reader of the whole point of the poem.
As lovely as this is, there wasn't anything I haven't seen before (but it was nicely written even so).
I didn't like the second stanza, just simply because "finding her in the hall" to me, has nothing to do with anything. Maybe you only used this as a rhyme? This is a bad habit.
Overall a romantic write, though nothing different to other love poems.
Thanks for shairng.

This poem is so good!!! It seems like a poem that could be published! I love it! :)

Wow this is amazing. i really liked it a lot. you did a wonderful job writing this. keep it up. i want to see more poems from you, your such a great writer! 5/5

Aww that was such a sweet poem, the rhythmn was good and it flowed well.. Beautifully written.. well done 5/5 xx

Omg this is so good!!
wow you really got talent.
i hope you publish a book some day that would be awesome.
wonderful poem you have written here.
its so beautiful. and it made me realize something.

my ex always use to tell me how much he loved me and that i meant everything to him and he was so lucky and i didnt believe him. and now i miss him cause he was probably the best thing that ever happened to me too. ugh.

well anyway nice job on this.
you did another excellent job.
i am adding you to my favorites =] 5/5

That was seriously one of the sweetest poems i have ever read! u have such a great talent. ur flow matched all the way through the whole poem and u never faltered with ur rhyme scheme. that was an awesome poem! definately a 5/5

Hey Wonderful poem, perfect rhyming and metre. I did find one mistake

What if she thinks your lying?
The let her know what's in your head.
Tell her that you truly meant.
Every single word you said.

The 2cd line you have "The let" i think It should read "then let"

Well done anyway, 5/5
~She Died Screaming

OMG this poem is off the hook, I'm in love with it, it was a really really good read dude, 5/5 for sure from me...

Aww that was so cute! nicely written again 5/5

Very effective....

Very long but u still kept me intigued the whole way thru it... u trully have a great way with words.... i loved it

I love it, its cute. i gave it a 5/5 keep makin more of these

WOW, this is an excellent love poem! One of my favs! great job!

This is definately my favorite of yours. i thought it told such a lovely little love story. great job. the flow was wonderful and the story was better. 5/5

I love how you repeated the last line in the first stanza in the last line of the last stanza. it was simply amazing!! i love this poem. it made me smile a huge smile when i read it. fantastic job. PERFECT!!!! 5/5

Aww... i love this its soo cute.. and i had to problem getting through it.. i mean wow.. its tryely spectacular .. the flow and the rhyme are perfect.. its sweet and i love how you reapeat in the end and beging of the poem

I love it, great job again! 5/5

Omg. this is my new favorite poem.. ever! this was so awesome. just what every girl is longing for. thank you for sharing this hun.
much love and many kisses,
bex