Comments : Innocence.

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Wow, you're good. I like reading your poems. Please check out mine and tell me what you think, kk? thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    What a powerful poem
    I re-read a couple of times to get the full effect.
    You have talent. A helluva lot of talent so keep it up.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Whitey

    Great poem, a clear and distinct image can be created in the mind of any responder, the language that uve used is great, read it a few times and yeh, 5 outta 5 from me buddy, keep up the work , cheers

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Ghost

    Wow man talk about being skiled
    keep it upp for this is a real 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I'm confused.... : ( I have to read it again

  • Absolutly fuking beautiful..

  • 17 years ago

    by ACSweetie

    I really loved your poem it was really good and well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    WOW! i love this one...the only thing is the last 2 verses the rhymes werent very together like they were in the previous verses...but i dont care it was an excellent write....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You are very talented, a great poem with a great meaning. it was really good, very sad and very strong and emotional. keep it up
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Took me a little while to read this one, but it was worth it. You have such great detail in your poems. I love that about them.

    -Katie

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is an amazing poem, really well written and a great yet tragic story. 5/5 x

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    Excellent poem, it was well written and had a good story to back it up. it flowed well and kept the reader interested. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    It was a very emotional write...great job! Ciao xx