LOL i liked it, particularly, the ending. 5/5

Dang very good poem...ending great beginin great such strong feelings 4 only 5 mins :P but great lol
peace
anthony

Lol so funny. enjoyed! Jpoet*

Haha love this, really made me smile... spot on. 5/5 xx

Ha. i love this poem!
it was funny and it made me smile. :-]

Exelento !!!!!!!!!!

Hahaha good job funny poem

Hey,
That was great! It made me smile! Great poem. 5/5. Keep it up!
~!Abs!~

I like it :)

Haha tht iz awsum..i lykd al of it...it waz soo funy haha =P nice job wel dun!!!
^Hannah^

HA! I LIKE THAT - NOT THE WAY I EXPECTED IT TO END! GREAT!

kELLY

All the time reading this I was thinking this doesn't go in this catagory... but then the end...LOL. Cute.

Absolutely brilliant lol you got a 5 from me...i know exactly how that feels lol...you worded it perfectly keep it up. -x-