Such a beautiful poem, so breathtaking penned....writing with beautiful emotions...simply but flowed with beautiful ended! well done, best wishes from west...bert ~

......all i can say is woow..... i mean.... wow..... i'm truly glad to see that you're posting again. you truly are an incredible poet.

This is...amazing. you're really good. keep it up

Goodness Hans...it's been a while, and I feel as though I've been deprived of so much.

This has an almost devastating sense of desire, to the point where I find it mournful. 'Enjoying every single grief' is fantastically sinister in the idea of 'your misery causing me pleasure'. A very sensuous piece.

xox

Hey great poem really beautiful! 5/5