That is really good, and true keep up the good work

Oh lovey thank you for your comments on my poem I am sorry at your young age you feel so sad. Bless you

I absolutely LOVE IT!!!!!

Very rythmic, and ok structured, just my personal thought....you could alway fit in two or three extra lines in this poem, but thats up to you to diced...grt poem...

I love these short poems. no messing around right to the point
good work laura.

whats up with you and al you are
little hard on him. lol im kidding
makes us try harder.