Wow that was really sad...but so beautiful. I can really tell you put a lot of emotion into this write and you must love this girl very much. Beautiful poem.
5.5
Breanna

Wow this is a very beautiful poem I love the feeling you put in it.
Thanks for your comment on my poem.

This is yet another great poem i love it

Omg im really about to cry now i love all your poems and there very goood..... i give you a 5/5 keep it up