Wow great piece I never tried a free style before and you made a great piece by putting heavy words not too heavy as what you think but a great meaning

specially this stanza i really like this

Wild desires clashing into the darkness
Perplexity shutters inside doubting brains
Lonely voices call within the barren walls
Until the foot of love grazes the muddy land

and I really like all your poems

they are all great

geneross

This poem is very romantic and sweet... it makes me smile great poem i reallyl enjoyed. i love it keep up the good work 5/5 takecare

Girl, what a lovely poem you penned here...so breathtaking write...so passionte yet flowed with beautiful emotions....nothing else i can say here, this just simply beautiful done....have a great day, best wishes from west...bert ~

Wow...very nice poem!! I loved how although it was freestyle some things still rhymed=D
Its avery well written love poem with more than enough emotion:)...Awesome 5/5

"And so the heart leaps within it's victory
Dancing and laughing all the more hysterically
Ringing bells from gold inscribed temples of love
Hearts always win with that gift from above."

Ah..you ended this one strongly, over-all great poem which is a worthwhile read.

God Bless!

This is such an excellent piece. I can feel the emotion pouring out of every word that you chose. It's very beautful and romantic. I've to you before that I admire your abilities and after reading this I stand by my words. Again I say you have done an excellent job. Keep up the wonderful work.

Letty

OMG!

"Wild desires clashing into the darkness
Perplexity shutters inside doubting brains
Lonely voices call within the barren walls
Until the foot of love grazes the muddy land"

Amazingx100000.
I love it love it love it!!
This was purely amazing, and brillent.
The whole poem was fantastic!

Another excellent piece. You have a lot of talent.

This is a really good poem. I loved the way that you worded it. It was very beautifully written. I loved it so much. You described everything so well and it all fit together perfectly. Great job on this! I loved it! 5/5

I'll be honest.. I did not like this... The way it was formatted and the story it told I just did not like. But, as always, no matter how much I disliked the wording, you have such a way to explain things, it baffles me.. Thus, great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This poem i loved so well... i loved the way the poem went... and the way it said the story... i loved the words u used... it was awsome!!!!

keep it up!

I loved this poem it was very deep and meaninful i really liked the way you described things and the words that you used too excelent poem well done! 5/5

NOOOOO!NO!NO!NO!NO! it's not freestyle. to be sincere i really like the poem but i'ts not free style

NOOOOO!NO!NO!NO!NO! it's not freestyle. to be sincere i really like the poem but i'ts not free style

I love it, it sweet!
gives hope! and it is always good to share love with others!!!!
keep up your work

I thought it was differant but i liked it, I like the incorperation of 2 line and 4 lines it made it more capturing becaus eof the varyation